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Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 3:09 pm

When light first touched the horizonday was born from our laughter.We picnicked in June,where shoeless wild ponies roamed,feeding yesterday's bread to white dolphins,following along our starboard...

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 3:53 pm

oh Jenna, this has to be one of my favorites of yours that I've read. Really enchanting. The opening stanzas have such a delicacy of beauty. There's a sadness, too, in the beloved's wandering and...

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 5:48 pm

This poem has that heartbreakingly lovelyfeel to it."Emptiness is you walking backwards,more rapidly each time I look."And I love the simplicity, yet powerin this line:"You forgot my eyes are...

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 6:01 pm

Jenna -This piece is special. One of your best of late.Truly beautiful and so heartfelt.maryann

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 7:02 pm

Hey Jenna. I enjoyed this one as well. And for all the reasons already stated. Very nicely crafted.Yours, Dark

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 11, 2007, 9:35 pm

Jen:Quickly, quickly, quicklycall Nature's 9-1-1and they'll send trees so thicklyso you can hug them one by one!grogreat emotions in your poem's imagery.

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 12, 2007, 9:59 am

Hi jazmine,Thank you, for such a wonderful reply to my poem,I appreciated it very much.Thank you, jazmine

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 12, 2007, 10:01 am

Hi Kerri,Thank you, Kerri, for your wonderful words to my poem.They are very much appreciated.Thank you, Kerri

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Hi MaryAnn,Thank you, for your wonderful words to my poem.I like your reply "One of your best of late"I was going through my files and found this poem.I wrote it seven years, ago.I don't know if it is...

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 12, 2007, 10:09 am

Hi Dark,Thank you, for your kind reply to my poem.I appreciate your kind words, more than you know.Thank you, Dark

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 12, 2007, 10:12 am

Hi Gro,I called Nature's 911, and they are sendinga thousand trees.Thank you, Gro, for your very kind reply to my poem,I appreciate your words, Gro!Thank you, Gro

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Re: Walking Backwards

February 12, 2007, 10:22 am

Wow jenna,Do you ever sleepI am still working to find out what the problem iswith your account. There definitely is one. I see you are logged in today under your secondIP...I don't know if the...

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